Chloe Connell and I set up a pad let in class; in order to receive responses to our draft treatment. After having read our draft treatment, people offered critique on what they liked and what could be improved. This will be helpful when re-drafting our treatment, as it will enable us to make changes according to what our target audience want. An example of what was particularly liked about our narrative, was the 'crazy party' theme so this will be kept in our video. A suggestion made was to ensure that the use of no alcohol is emphasised.
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